tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3477712509362591255.post1251846267259572203..comments2023-09-16T02:21:33.540-07:00Comments on Mayhem: MayhemJ.R.Poulter/J.R.McRaehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17906320253154355620noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3477712509362591255.post-45495074864966868352008-10-30T17:40:00.000-07:002008-10-30T17:40:00.000-07:00Hi JR!Just wanted to say how much I liked 'tracks'...Hi JR!<BR/><BR/>Just wanted to say how much I liked 'tracks'<BR/><BR/>especially the descriptions of the sea and the second half where you have that great change:<BR/><BR/>"He’s different.<BR/><BR/>Up on the grass<BR/>He lets the wind cut through his shirt"<BR/><BR/>and the whole poem shifts!mountain-ashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03913913919862931843noreply@blogger.com